She's okay. Needs a bit more width to her upper legs, or some thinning off of her waist and upper hips. Something doesn't quite line up there. Perhaps the corset is a bit wide over all. I do hope that was the sort of feedback you wanted...
I am building a clay figure now going to take a couple pics of it. I cant call it a her or a he for its nether. I will say it looks like a girl but it was born a boy and his name was Kelly I am writing a story about her she lives as a girl even though she was born male, story takes place in 1916. she is hurt in a horrid train wreck her mother and father are killed in the wreck. She is hurt very bad loosing her left leg bellow the knee and right hand. an old man saves her who actually a wizard but he thinks she is a girl and uses his magic to save her but in doing so the magic makes the child a mix of both genders. he realizes his mistake he made but couldn't undue his error. so he gave her the strength of 10 men and the superior intelligence. so what you think of it so far?